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  • Mood: Remorse
  • Listening to: Random songs... mostly PMV
  • Reading: What i wrote
  • Watching: Nothing
  • Playing: The computer
  • Eating: just ate subs form Subway -w-
  • Drinking: just drank Sprite -w-
Mary sue/Gary Stu test:

Appearance

[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] (if a female) they have large boobs (irkens dont have boobs...)
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender (She's gonna be forever alone ;;n;; Even her crush dun' like her... SHE'S BEING REJECTED SO MUCH!! DDDX)
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends (lots thanks to you guys ;u; )
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] Some part of their body glows (Does eyes count? o3o)
[] They are emo/cutesy
[x] They have wings (Demon form only o3o)
[] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (Same ol' clothes (COPIES >:C) except when in P.J.s 'n' casual clothes C: )
Subtotal: 3

Relations

[x] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth (YERP.)
[x] They have an evil nemesis (Rubi (in a way) and ZIM >:C)
[x] Who is their sibling (Rubi (My sisters OC))
[] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[x] They have lost one/both of their parents
[x] They witnessed one/both of their parents' deaths
[] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[x] So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis (ZIM >:C)
[x] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure (not seeking adventure-- just cuz she didn't want caught after killing her parents..)
[] They look much younger/older than they really are. (SHE'S 13!!! >O<)
[] They never knew their parents (well she knew them but she has very little memory of them D: )
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are currently in a relationship
Subtotal: 7

Race/Species

[] They are possessed by an angel
[x] They are possessed by a demon     
[x] But they struggle to be good anyway
[] They are a mythical creature
[x] They are an alien (Irken obviously -3-)
[] They are part mythical creature
[] They are part alien
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[] And they grew up thinking they were human
[] They are the last of their kind
Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens
Subtotal: 3

Powers

[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[x] They have a special ability/power (demon :3)
[] But they don't know about it yet
[x] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift (do wings/tail count? O_O)
[x] They are immortal (Depends on the weapon, though -.-)
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have a 'special type' of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them (haha what soul? :iconimhappiestplz: (T'was taken by the demon..))
[x] They can talk to spirits/ghosts (Anyone can talk TO spirits; it's getting them to talk back that is the hard part)
[x] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[x] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc give them a nervous breakdown
Subtotal: 6

Mentality

[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[x] They struggle to stay sane (final stage of demon form -.-)
[] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[] They are very intelligent
[x] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[] They have hallucinations
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[x] They are very lively/happy
[x] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[x] They are very patient (somewhere inbetween)
Subtotal:  5

Miscellaneous

[] They are physically strong
[x] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem. (She no say dem out loud.. Plus she only thinks "Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family" o3o)
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[x] They are hiding from someone/something (THA TALLESTS CUZSHEHATESTHEMSOMUCH!! :iconthamoosedibplz:)
[x] They have a rare blood type (black o3o)
[] They cry blood
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are from a long line of ----
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are 'the chosen one'  
Subtotal: 3

Total: 27


Point Reductions

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
[] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[] They are unattractive
Total Reduction:  0


Final Total: 27

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26> -Mary-Sue


Dear god-- Jewel's mary sue ;;n;;

BUT ITS NOT HER FAULT!!! :iconcryforeverplz:
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:iconthegir979:
TheGir979 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
You can change her.... Jez was a well-balanced for me... :P
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:icondibfan4lifex3:
DibFan4LifeX3 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
NO. :stare: Jewel is Jewel. If I change her, she woon't be JEWEL! :iconflailplz:
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:iconthegir979:
TheGir979 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
You. You are amazing. You accept your OC. I was testing you. Just like how I can't change my OC Jez, even though she isn't a mary. :)
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DollyTheKAT Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I have 11
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:icondollythekat:
DollyTheKAT Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
all together
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raining-candy Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
Ugh. Don't let these dumb quizzes get to you. I was once afraid that my OC Fiona was one too. If even IF she was, I just don't care! Jewel is your OC and you should be happy with her no matter what! :heart:
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:icondibfan4lifex3:
DibFan4LifeX3 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
;u; Oh, you're right!! Thank you for putting some sense into me! XD :glomp:
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LeaTheInvader Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Jewel has black blood to?
black blood buddies~ *:trollface:*
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DibFan4LifeX3 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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